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                                                                                                        3 «а», 112   Majakovskogo

                                                                                                         Khabarovsk 680000

                                                                                                         Russia

                                                                                                         15 th December

   Dear Father Frost,

   I’m writing to  thank you very much for the invitation and an opportunity to study at 

 school of Magic. I was glad to learn from you that they can get magic knowledge. I 

think it will be very interesting. 

   I want to study the subject of "Magic for students", where I will teach you how to 

use a magic wand. This wand will help me to make our planet without wars and turn 

all the terrorists into good people. All the people on Earth will live together happily 

ever after. They will be able to travel to all countries. I'd like to visit England and see 

Windsor Сastle, Buckingham Palace, the Victoria and Albert Museum, Museum  Madame 

Tussauds in London, Tower Сastle, Tower bridge, over the river Thames and the swans

 that live there.

   I want to visit USA and see Statue of Liberty, I want to climb of the Empire State 

Building, visit the American Museum of Natural History in New York, ride a boat on 

the Hudson river around Manhattan to see the Brooklyn Bridge and the Bridge 

Verrazano. I want to visit the Library of Congress in Washington and walking around 

Capitol hill and  the National Air and Space Museum .

     If I had a magic wand , all my dreams will come true.

  Well, got to go now.

  Andrey